How am i revising my draft.

Well i am going to revise my draft just like i have been doing for a while now. I start off by reading it out loud either to myself or someone that i live with. Then i begin to find out what kind of holes i have in the paper. If i go into a rant or not. If i do, do i have the right wording to bring it all back. I then read the intro and conclusion. I ask myself if it makes sense. I wrap it up with reading it again. I make sure it is the essay i want it to turn in.

Questions i have for my conferense

1. Does my thesis make any sense when referring to who James bond is as a person. 

2. Does James Bond seem like he is changing his image? If so why?

3. Does his change have something to do with the culture we see today?

Some questions i have for my reviewer

1. How can i  make this less random and make it central to what i am trying to say.

2. Do you agree with my thesis?

3. Does my conclusion make sense?

Holden raises hell

Gish Jen uses what a lot of critics say about the book to establish what other people feel about the book. She not only uses people who like the book but also people who hate it and she gives us many reasons why they do not like it. She also pairs these up with her opinion with what she thinks of the book. The strategies she uses to integrate her research is done in such a way that gives us more curiosity. She talks about the two men who have killed or have tried to kill while under the "influence" of this book. Showing us that this book affects people in drastic ways. As she talks about the flaws in the book she points out that these flaws really do not matter, They don't matter because even though the book is not perfect structure wise it still has made an impact on who the current generation or even the generation that book was made for, we can see this impact made in such a way that schools are having their children read this book.