Pre Writing for project 3

Writing about my movie is becoming a little difficult. Trying to cut off alot of dead weight and focus on the thesis can be a bit frustrating at times. I just need to keep reading it out load and find out where this paper is trying to go. Mens studies has a lot there. To me its finding the right tuning. Once I find that i can really get into it. there is alot of areas where i can explore.